Re-editing: Initial Assessment

     Last class's peer editing truly helped our group gain perspective on our film. The critiques we received back were that some of the shots from the car were a little dark. So we can improve some of those shots with the interior lights on possibly.  Also, we can try some below the face lightening so it still appears dark. Additionally, we didn't realize the sound effects of the car crash action did not coordinate. Our group decided to reshoot the scene by making the reaction to the ¨car crash¨ more realistic. We will shoot at night and use the same outfits to have a seamless look. We want to include a larger jerk so it is more obvious that the crash happened. We also did not feature all ten of our titles in the original cut. We plan to add the rest of them in the correct order. We decided to evenly space the rest of the titles throughout the movie and not group them in the fewer action spots. There were a few spelling errors that can be corrected. We are debating on whether to change the color of any of the fonts. A neutral color that is light was chosen so the color is consistent. The other group also suggested using voice over when featuring dialogue in a scene. My group deliberated and decided we would attempt to try to silence unneeded background noise to improve dialogue audio. The voice-over is challenging to sync with the mouth movements and direct dialogue will be better. The timing was good so the changes will need to fit in the existing movie.  The ¨your next sign on the seat is a bit out of focus. This could be reshot and zoomed in to better read it. Overall, our movie needs a few slight changes but not major work.